Hi Lachie, Have have watched your animation and really like that you and Benj have planned our a story for the super turtle. You have both taken a lot of time to create your character and the props in the story. Great work, I'm looking forward to your next one.
I love your animation, particularly the part where the character hides in his shell. You and Benji have thought carefully about the storyline which is such an important part of the process. It sounds like you boys also had to compromise along the way, another important skills to be able to do. Awesome job.
I liked the end when you added of what the super turtle looks in real life it was hilarious. You brought me back when I did a short animation like you. Maybe next you can add more detail so like the super turtle could save somebody. Do you think the end is funny? From Sahil :)
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Hi Lachie, Have have watched your animation and really like that you and Benj have planned our a story for the super turtle. You have both taken a lot of time to create your character and the props in the story. Great work, I'm looking forward to your next one.
ReplyDeleteI love your animation, particularly the part where the character hides in his shell. You and Benji have thought carefully about the storyline which is such an important part of the process. It sounds like you boys also had to compromise along the way, another important skills to be able to do. Awesome job.
ReplyDeleteKia ora I'm Sahil from Yaldhurst School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the end when you added of what the super turtle looks in real life it was hilarious. You brought me back when I did a short animation like you. Maybe next you can add more detail so like the super turtle could save somebody. Do you think the end is funny? From Sahil :)
Thank's Yeah it's very funny.
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